tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1755729305868728961.post5227918350521873573..comments2012-06-28T13:29:21.368-07:00Comments on What My Father Never Told Me: The Pursuit of Excellenceyou are what you readhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17397887493073863245noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1755729305868728961.post-13648934367069187352011-07-07T17:25:29.702-07:002011-07-07T17:25:29.702-07:00you burried your thesis, your main point. this art...you burried your thesis, your main point. this article should have begun with a phrase you reserved for the third paragraph, "larry bird epitomizes the pursuit of excellence." start with a grand general idea and then use your examples to illustrate why you are right.Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03029358776699789913noreply@blogger.com